6th Grade Literature

St. Catherine of Siena School, Mr. Federle

Poems of Pompeii

(after reading “The Dog of Pompeii” by Louis Untermeyer

 

We have just completed reading a story about a boy and his dog who lived during the days

before the destruction of the ancient city of Pompeii by the eruption of Mt. Vesuvius, in AD 79. 

In addition, we viewed a video about this tragic event, and the efforts of modern scientists to

piece together the life and death of the people of Pompeii.

 

This story is a work of historical fiction, that is, an imaginary story set in a historically

accurate background.

 

THE ASSIGNMENT:

You are to write a poem, approximately 20 lines in length, in which you take the historical facts

you find in “The Dog of Pompeii” and in the video, and use those facts as the background for

a narrative poem (story-telling poem).  You should incorporate the following tools from your

poet’s toolbox:

Ø      Figurative Language:

o       Metaphor (comparison, something is something”)

o       Similie (comparison, “something is like something”)

o       Personification (give human qualities to an animal or an inanimate object)

Ø      Imagery: paint word pictures using language that appeals to the five senses.

Ø      Rhyme: repetition of vowel sounds at the end of lines

Ø      Alliteration: repetition of consonant sounds.

 

Don’t forget that, since you are telling a story, you have to have include the elements of plot,

such as

o       Main character (protagonist)

o       An antagonist, who causes conflict with the main character

o       A conflict… the protagonist wants something, or to be something, that the

antagonist somehow prevents.

o       Rising action.. as the conflict intensifies

o       Climax: when something happens that solves the conflict (someone wins, or loses)

o       Falling action: tying up loose ends; this is often when you make the main idea,

or theme, clear.

o       Resolution: the end.

 

After you write your first or second draft, show your poem to a classmate, parent, friend, or

sibling to get a second or third opinion.  Revise it until you are happy with it.

 

RUBRIC NARRATIVE POEM    Name__________________________ Poem Title________

Question

Response/ Grade (10-9 very good, 8-9 good, 7-8 fair, 6-7 poor, <6 unacceptable)

Comment

Did you tell a good story?

 

 

Have you drawn your protagonist clearly?

 

 

Is the conflict clear?

 

 

Have you made a good plot?

 

 

Do you have a clear theme?

 

 

Did you use figurative language (metaphors, similes, etc).?

 

 

Did you use imagery?

 

 

Did you use interesting sound devices (rhyme, rhythm, alliteration, etc)?

 

 

Mechanical aspects correct and effective (grammar, punctuation, spelling, # lines)?

 

 

Did your reader enjoy your poem?

 

 

 


 

POETRY PERFORMANCE RUBRIC: NAME_______________________________

 

ITEM

Response/ Grade (20-19 good, 18-17, 16-15, 14-13 poor, 12 or less unacceptable)

COMMENT

Project voice/ used inflection/ not monotone

 

 

Showed enthusiasm

 

 

Voice conveyed the rhythm of the poem

 

 

Posture good/ made eye contact

 

 

Spoke clearly, loud enough, slow enough

 

 

TOTAL